2022-01-13 分类: 托福 3 名老师参与回答 421 人浏览
很多同学在托福的独立写作部分很难拿到高分,面对给出来的话题不知道该怎么拓宽思路,找不到合适的角度来证明自己的观点,导致说服力不强。我们今天为大家整理出了7个托福写作的万能思路,一起来看看吧~~~~
近年来托福考试独立写作部分涉及到的题材,几乎都离不开教育学习、工作效率、品质交友、生活娱乐这几个方面。
不管题干描述的有多五花八门,我们都可以尝试用这几个理由:
effectiveness and efficienc/有效性
economy and finance/经济
technology and internet/科技和互联网
health and environment/健康与环境
culture and globalization/文化与全球化
social relationship/社交关系
career development/职业发展
举例:
题干
Government should invest more in education than infrastructure to improve the society?
这道题我们可以从万能思路中Effectiveness这个思路入手,那么大的观点就是:
Education is more effective than infrastructure in changing the world.
这是一个high level的观点,比较宏观,接下来我们要做的就是narrow down, 将一个high level的观点narrow成一个middle level的观点:
it is more effective for the government to invest in education than infrastructure because such an act generates greater long-term welfare.
有middle level的观点之后,大家需要仔细的解释一下,补充一些细节:
In the long term, people will be able to learn more knowledge, enhance their professional skills, and change the world they live in, instead of simply enjoying easier rides to wherever they would like to go. This is exactly the reason why we should spend more in education.
最后,将他们放在一起,就可以组成一个段落啦:
Education is more effective than infrastructure in changing the world. it is more effective for the government to invest in education than infrastructure because such an act generates greater long-term welfare. In the long term, people will be able to learn more knowledge, enhance their professional skills, and change the world they live in, instead of simply enjoying easier rides to wherever they would like to go. This is exactly the reason why we should spend more in education.
这道题除了万金油观点的第一个:effectiveness之外,还可以用很多其他的观点。
比如第三个万能观点:technology and internet。大家可以说政府更多的投入到教育可以促进高科技快速发展,从而改变社会。
再比如第六个万能观点:social relationship。我们可以论述政府更多的投入教育可以让人与人之间的差距更平等,narrow social gap. 这个方法可以用到各种题目的写作当中,希望大家都能举一反三~快找几道题练起来吧~
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